Today was a great day! Because we got to make poems. I have never made a poem till today. So it was a really new thing for me. I found it challenging, but once I got the hang of thingsn it was a easy as pie. A poem is like writing a story but more exciting. Because its a defrent why of writing. And there are so meany types of it. Its not jus one!
?Maybe you will learn somthing?
ENJOY
This is a extra poem
hope you enjoy it.
I am the lava which flows witen me.
I am as hot as venus.
I am the fire that destroys anything in my way.
I am the cloud that stands out from the others
I am a volcano
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Question time .......
Have you ever made a poem?
And if you have are you proud of it?
Kia ora Liberty, I really loved reading your diamante poem but I really, really, really loved listening to you read your poem. You have great expression and have selected fantastic language. Keep up the wonderful work.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Miss cramer,
ReplyDeleteThank you for your really really nice comment.
And now i fill like my poem really did pay off!
bye