Monday, 27 September 2021

TO THE MOON

 This is a story about at brave warore. Who is taken to the moon! The story isn't done YET. But i would like to have some feed back! 


The question of the day is..... Do you think the moon is made of cheese? 

3 comments:

  1. Tino pai Liberty. I was hooked in by your question of the day and stayed to read your story. I like the vocabulary you used. Peculiar is a peculiar word to spell so good effort. I don't think the moon is made of cheese because how could the milk have gotten up there? But now I'm wondering why people think that. Any ideas?

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    1. HI Phil,

      And thank you for your nice comment!
      And for the feedback for the spelling.
      And i don't think the moon is made of cheese is well.
      bye

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  2. Hi Liberty, thanks for sharing your awesome story, it has a very intriguing introduction. I guess in a certain light the moon does look a bit like cheese but I can confirm (according to Neil Armstrong) that it is definitely NOT!

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