Before
This is the firts version of my work. It wont be as good as the next one. But I hope you enoy the short clip anywhy!
After This is my newenst version of the work. It has better photos and writing. I hope you ejoy the sort clip.
Question time..........
What version is you favourite? Is it the before or after!!
BYE!!
Kia ora Liberty. I like the way you use questions to interact with your readers. I like the after one as it looks like there is more detailed writing. But I did like how the poem was on the sticky note in the before post. So I guess I like a bit of each.
ReplyDelete