Wednesday, 28 July 2021

Any feed back?

                                          FEED BACK IS NEEDED 

     Hi liberty here and are class are learning that if you have a half blog post then you  can get more comments because people want to give you feed back  and that's what I want I need people to give me feed back on my work but my scratch is teaching you about postie thoughtful and helpful blog post and comments and I am trying to tech you in a scratch

press photo to get to my work!

hope you enjoy my work on scratch!

6 comments:

  1. Hello Liberty,
    I like that you have added a link on your picture. Maybe you could check the link because it doesn't work (as of now). Also there are some minor mistakes that I think you could fix. Once you fix the link I will be happy to try it out.
    Until then Blog you later, Caleb

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  2. Kia ora Liberty, Coco here.
    Your scratch is really cool.
    Next time you could make your giraffe talk or move
    but overall it was really good
    blog ya later

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  3. Kia Ora Liberty,
    This is great post and i love how you have used scratch to creat this DLO. This is similar to a scratch i did in cybersmart that is on my blog!
    Next time you could make your giraffe talk and mabye do some movements.
    Overall it is a very good post!
    Bye!

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  4. Hi Liberty! It is Byesion. Maybe you could check the picture. or use Hyperlinks!
    Apart from all that it was fabulous! Bye!

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  5. Hi Librety me Alfonsus remember me ummm I really like your blog that you a have made it really looks amazeing pls tell me that you drawed it because this picture looks amazeing anyways great job and have a nice.

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  6. Hello Liberty,
    I like that you have added a link on your picture. Maybe you could check the link because it doesn't work (as of now). Also there are some minor mistakes that I think you could fix. Once you fix the link I will be happy to try it out.
    Until then Blog you later

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